Friday, June 1, 2012

Clouds

 

So close, but still so far.

It feels like I am the dark clouds and you are the immeasurable ocean below me. With the sun’s warmth, you will complete my way of life. You will make the cycle turn. You will help me create or destroy, cultivate or destruct, nurture or annihilate, and bless or leave someone hopeless.

It’s amazing how you affect me, though we seem so close, yet, so far.

Up above, everything is dwarf like. The details are so precise. Like an amazing work of art that describe how the earth’s surface differs – desserts are smooth, mountains show its peak, and the vast plains seems to be a never-ending shade of emeralds. Trees will be the lime dots in the brown soil. Rivers and highways are the snake like lines that doesn’t have a beginning or an end. Skyscrapers are the small square like creations surrounded by ant like cars. Circles describe relationships between places and people.

From where I am, you are just part of the whole masterpiece.

You are just a dot in the whole mix of colors. A pixel jumbled with all the browns, beiges, oranges and blues. You are supposed to be nothing, but up above; you are the only thing I see.

I am just your best friend. While you are the reason why I feel suspended in thin air, fantasizing how magical the world can be once you are beside me. You just don’t help me exist. You help Dreaming more exciting.

You are so close, but still, so far.

And you just don’t know how much I want to smash into you.

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*citybuoy *♔ıǝɹɯɐı♔ *ןıuǝ oɟ ɟןıƃɥʇ *Orange Wit *Spiral Prince

21 comments:

  1. OM! Really really good job LJ. You captured the theme perfectly :D

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    1. Hahaha... You just don't know how scared I was to post this one. Thanks for the kind words Rei. It really made me feel better. :)

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    2. Hahah. You're really good LJ. Don't be afraid, ako nga eh, keri lang kahit di sure. Hahaha.

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    3. hahaha, you are also good as well.

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  2. may 2nd theme na pala ang round table heheh makagawa na ng salingket na artwork hihi

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    1. Sumali ka na kasi sa round table sir mots!

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    2. taragis. ang hirap pala ng 2nd topic lol

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    3. sabi ko sa iyo we, hahaha! Kaya mo yan!

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  3. wow, i feel the agony. the subject is really sucky. frienzone sucks! PM

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    1. hahaha. Well, some of the best love songs were written talks about the pain of being in love. I think when you write something painful, its more beautiful. Thanks PM!

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  4. i enjoy very much the affect here along with the use of metaphor. brilliant really.

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  5. Gawan na 'to ng music video! :)

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    1. bakit naman music video? :)

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    2. Idek, this post seems so musical. PArang pang-smash. lolz

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    3. hahahaha... I never see it that way, pero salamat Nyl!

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  6. The last line wraps the whole piece very neatly. Great job here! :)

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  7. Get rid of Atlas and be united, Orange. :)

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  8. Fire Atlas and be united with your beloved, Orange. :)

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    1. Hahaha... Atlas can get complicated sometimes. Thank you for your thoughts, SP.

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