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Monday, October 1, 2012

Away

A Round Table Challenge



hAng on.
i will fly you to the moon
make you kiss the clouds
and say hello to the stars
then the two of us will fall
float, fly, then fall
our eyes Watered with glee
two spirits finally become free
All of this will happen,
if you will just know mY name.



6: Spirited Away

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12 comments:

  1. been here :) ... this was so simple poem but with a great message :)

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    1. haha. sometimes, great messages doesn't have to come in big sentences. :). Thank you for appreciating this.

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  2. whatta moving and lovely poem

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    1. waaa... mecoy, maraming salamat, i never see my poem that way. :D Better watch spirited away, it will inspire you din. :D

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  3. this is a pretty convincing way to woo someone, lj. :D great job!

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    1. secret admirer ang peg. lols... Salamat, PM.

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  4. brilliant LJ. so concise and so powerful.

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  5. Unang kita ko is "Away" (Tagalog word for "Fight") hehehe

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  6. Ang ganda kasi it's short tapos nalagay mo lahat ng essentials. Kalurkey! Haha XD

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    1. salamat reimond, hehe. Well, its the best scene diba?

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